by promithius
consider breast reduction surgery, it will save your back...get rid of the cow look.
Kind of an abrupt ending. Almost as if it were copied from a list. More details would be good, like how difficult was the pregnancy/birth, how the move went, etc. Lisa in a dream seemed odd, but what if his Dad unexpectedly reentered the picture to find Corrine with his son’s child?
Makes you want to pull back that “The End”, eh?
This story was painful to read, no flow at all and the dialog was strained and weird.
Love this description...."Mom was holding her breasts up until I was comfortably positioned then lowered the nearest nipple to rest on my lips. I opened my mouth allowing her nipple to drop in.... She leaned over flattening her breast across my face. The other breast I played with, squeezing, bouncing her soft breast and tweaking her hardened nipple"
Just divine.
I want to read more now she's pregnant about the son suckling her milk after the birth - yum!