All Comments on 'The Tub'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
G cup tits?

consider breast reduction surgery, it will save your back...get rid of the cow look.

Marvin2017Marvin2017over 1 year ago

Kind of an abrupt ending. Almost as if it were copied from a list. More details would be good, like how difficult was the pregnancy/birth, how the move went, etc. Lisa in a dream seemed odd, but what if his Dad unexpectedly reentered the picture to find Corrine with his son’s child?

Makes you want to pull back that “The End”, eh?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story was painful to read, no flow at all and the dialog was strained and weird.

steve437steve437over 1 year ago

Love this description...."Mom was holding her breasts up until I was comfortably positioned then lowered the nearest nipple to rest on my lips. I opened my mouth allowing her nipple to drop in.... She leaned over flattening her breast across my face. The other breast I played with, squeezing, bouncing her soft breast and tweaking her hardened nipple"

Just divine.

I want to read more now she's pregnant about the son suckling her milk after the birth - yum!

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