All Comments on 'The Tunnel Builder Ch. 04'

This story keeps getting better as it’s revealed. It leaves me with a lot of thoughts where it is headed. I expect there are more surprises to come. I hope this goes on for awhile. Thank You! *****

Monica, you tease. Just as I was thinking that this delightful, though ultimately sad story was drawing to a close you go and open up another story line. You are truly a wonderful storyteller and I delight in immersing myself in this very believable world that you have created. Furthermore, not only is the story an enjoyable read but the sex is very hot and pleasurable as well. Five stars from me.

Like AliceGee, I thought this was the final chapter until you came up with this whammy. It's intriguing now to speculate on what might be coming next. To date, a first-rate story.

Tremendous story. Happy that it seems another chapter is forthcoming.

This is so good. It should be a book. This website is beneath the quality of your storytelling.

OMG I am so hooked. I was supposed to do a research for work but ended uo binging this story instead. 😂 Five stars ain't enough for this masterpiece. Can't wait to read the rest.

Is it just me, or does Polly seem to be getting more selfish?

I hope you continue with the next phase of this story! Like all of your works there is a depth to them despite their brevity, you have a skill of painting an image with few strokes. With those sex scenes it seems a few strokes is all it takes to find that release.

I hope that you continue this story.

Incredibly well thought out intriguing story

The characters draw you in and I can’t wait for the next chapter .

Thank you for this well crafted work.

Ohhhhh you HAVE to finish this story!!!!!

It seems you have left the door ajar. OK, time you got back to work and start on the next phase of the journey. Magnificent isn't a word I would normally use to describe a story, but you have such a knack for combining, fiction, facts and history. I found myself googling places and names, that's how much I got drawn into the story. Please, please I beg of you to continue.

Monica is there ever going to be a chapter 5? Seems like there's still story to be told here!! I loved this series.