All Comments on 'The Tutor'

who wouldn't want a pretty young girl like this -- especially one who is older and knows the ropes? All young boys need such tutoring.

Good idea but you distance your reader by not choosing a point of view. You skip between them and reader gets disassociated. You have to build up one party's lust for a reader to care at all.

To fast paced and would have been a very good story if you would of just slowed down and made it a sexy - romantic story instead of wham bam all the way. Keep writing and learn by your mistakes. Make your readers want to really get into your story and want more. Thanks.

I liked the story (though agree that the buildup could have been slower and more detailed), but my main question is that we never learned why the parents wanted to get him a tutor? If he was a straight A student (as described), it didn't make sense!

Well written story but as one of you other readers said, "why a tutor for a straight A student". Erotic story but point of story is puzzling.

the Ct. Yankee

I am sorry I with that other person if impose a question in middle of story I suggest you answer it for female character. or something it confuses the reader furthermore...do the parents come back and feel threatened when they find them together? I mean is there aftermath...what they just did? *dear lord I am dry down here.*

Good story. I am assuming the tutor was meant by the parents as away of getting there intelligent son socialized with a female, where he may have difficulty doing so independently due to his intellect. Not because of attraction to the opposite sex. This was obvious.

I don't know that I have ever see so many mistakes (& I JUST copied one of them direct from the story).

FORGET about the words, & learn when you should use a period versus a comma! NOT ONLY is it bad, but it seems to go on FOREVER!