by RonCabo
Absolutely magnificent! So well written, the development of the characters, the story and the ups and down. One of the best we have read over the years. 5*
That was a simply wonderful story. I can't wait to start part two and also read more of your work.
This is a wonderful story, with excellent character development and a plot that never slacks for a moment. The romantic atmosphere that pervades throughout really shows it to be much more of a romance than an erotic couplings story; however, the site has no Erotic Romance category. Five stars for a great love story.
LOVED it, and them...
Going into my 5-star folder...
Also 5 + fave
just love reading your work. Well-done - great story line, 2 lovable, realistic characters, and i loved the dialogue. just a great read. i hope you write more soon!!!
5 star!!
Did a very good job in writing this story romance passion sex and two people from different sides of the tracks thank you very much I look forward to reading more of your writing