All Comments on 'The Two Week Treehouse'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 3 years ago

Gentle, interesting little story!

5

RiverMayaRiverMayaabout 3 years ago

I loved it, 5000 stars.

chastenchastenabout 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this one.

OneAuthorOneAuthorabout 3 years ago

Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Abasi was given excellent advice. Sweet story. 5 *.

SuggestionSuggestionabout 3 years ago

A simply awesome story. I can easily imagine reading this from an anthology of short stories alongside some of the greats.

jezzazjezzazabout 3 years ago

This is just great. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Brilliant.

Another beautifully crafted fabulous journey from one of the most creative authors.

- DK

ArcTalyxArcTalyxabout 3 years ago

A well crafted tale that brings to mind the many wonders, hopes, fears, innocence and magic of childhood and how those come together to shape our future.

Rocket081960Rocket081960about 3 years ago

OUTSTANDING! Thanks.

NYSwedeNYSwedealmost 3 years ago

I like all your stuff, this one is an interesting story, is it a new fable or is it based on an old text? Either way, nice job.

MojomaggieMojomaggieover 2 years ago

Very creative. I assume you are aware that the name Abasi comes from an African deity in the Efik and Ibibio cosmology, one frequently referenced in the Cuban rituals of Abakua and other Congo belief systems. Nice blending of Afro-Cuban and Irish spirituality and myth. ; )

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NOTE: I'll be taking Painting By The Numbers down soon, so if you'd like to read, please do so quickly. In the meantime, the new Hop on the Bus story is moving along well. Coming up in 2024: Second Hand Hearts, a story in the Hop on the Bus universe, but with a twist. Than...