All Comments on 'The Two Wives'

This was expertly written and kept me engrossed all the way through. I hope to see a sequel soon.. Would love to see how the children turn out and how they are taught that is ok to have two mothers.

That was worth reading. It kept me in grossed , the plot was excellent and the ending wonderful . Hope there is a sequel out there

They Are On The Bed Margie Replies "...We Will Learn Together To Make Love".

YES, Together They Explored The Pleasures Of True Passionate Love Making.

Love Making That Only Two Women Can Achieve.

Wife To Mother, This Is One Very Interesting Twist. Surely A Follow Up Is Needed.

so good chapter 2 please

It might be a great story I don't know, because as an actual lesbian trying to read it I was too squicked by the straight sex to continue. Perhaps a small warning in the authors note might save someone else from encountering the same issue.

I'm sorry anonimous whom starts her comment "Opps". We differ, I don't thing forced sex, humilliating sex from man to woman is straight sex; the scene was a way to justify the plot; I'm sorry that as a "true lesbian" you were "squicked" by that segment of the story that was in itself a way to achieve an end. To the other readers with laudatory comments many thanks. Muchas gracias.

There has to be more! Please?

When you used an editor you should also have used a proof reader.

good job. more please, pretty please ;)

I think this was absolutely one of the most beautiful stories that I have read in a long time. Like the ending said, 'or is it the beginning?' I have no idea what more could have been said, but I wished there was more to read. Maybe one day we will see a new beginning.

Thanks Fermpera

Saved to re-read it some other time when im feeling down :3

So well done! Please follow this up with more of them! Thank you!

After reading this story for a second time, I found it more enjoyable then my first reading... Thank you for the wonderful story.