All Comments on 'The Ugly Girl Next Door'

A touching story ...

That one phrase is brilliant, captures a big piece of the porn experience and elevates this story. Well done!

This is a well written and touching story, despite its brevity. It's very tough to develop a character, offer hot sex and finish with reality in a single page. If this is a true story, please know that there is hope as the men you date age and mature. I am not the immature, shallow child of my youth. Sexual desire can definitely be awakened with thoughts, words and actions. The best lover of my life is someone that "young" me would have never given a second look. Online is a great forum to get to know someone before you meet in person. I know it's risky, but I'm glad I did it.

This is well-written, tight and successfully defies the norm. Good job! Got a 5 star vote from me.

What a wonderful, well-written piece. Sarah feels very three-dimensionaly human, not just a stick-figure prop to set up the sex.

A poignant story. Thank you.

With a short-fall in one area, make up fo it in others. Great job and you proved my point.

Lee2012

self esteem issues

Not a whole lot to the story but I appreciate the female was a normal looking character. Usually the female is less then a size 4 with long legs, golden hair, curvy with Dolly Parton sized breasts.

The not so attractive girls need some loving just as much as the attractive ones.

sad she sounds wonderful. beauty is in the eye of the beholder. she is probably not an ugly person but a plain jane but some of us like our girls plain. think about it~!!!!!

... but somehow sad story. Sad, because the author left everything unsolved. Sex moments are okay, but is this only about sex? No, it's about feeling UGLY. The big question here - what IS ugly? Why the character feels ugly? Is it only about being seen by the boys? I don't think so.

In my life I met many girls who wasn't beautiful like Maggie Q or Charlize Theron (Sorry, Angelina Jolie isn't my favorite), but they were cute and attractive because of their inner traits. There are famous singers, who aren't beautiful, but people love them anyway. Sometimes inner beauty easy overcomes everything else.

So, back to the story. The author told me about outer beauty of a character and almost nothing about the inner one. That's sad and very shallow. Perhaps sex stories must be shallow at some point, but not like this. It's like a selective blindness.

If he is truly an introvert, then he is still alone and available. Sarah needs to track him down and pick up where they left off. Go get him girl.

No hyperbole. No playing shrink. No shoulda/coulda.

It is a damned good story. I enjoyed the reading.

Sad

Great story start: where’s the ending?

Don't meet many women who genuinely believe their ugly not even plain janes so this woman must be horrible looking. There are ugly women and ugly men, enough with the everyone's beautiful bullshit or more often every women is beautiful shit. Good story and good they never became a couple, she needs to find someone like her or a average looking man at best.

My cousin and I live as man and wife. He rescued this ugly duckling when I needed a date my sophomore year in college. Even though he’s sampled what else is available several times over the years we’ve been lovers since that first date. My face is plainer than plain but my otherwise thick body incudes a very narrow waist and in some positions his very average dick rubs m quim and clitoris just right. 7 years ago, in our late thirties we shared our love with the family, moved in together and could not be happier.