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Aaaaahhhh! Too short!

You've written enough great stuff here to know that these short chapters just frustrate the hell out of people, and ending each chapter on yet another cliffhanger doesn't help either!

I'd happily wait a week longer for something just a little bit more substantial!

There story is there, the characters are there, the worldbuilding is there, it's all there except for enough meat with each installment to actually be worth bothering reading each chapter as it comes out!

It may have been short . But still a very good chapter . The idiot below doesn't know how to appreciate such good writing . I know I am late to the party . By a few months . But who knows you could haver written it 5 years ago and this is how you released it . Well done .