All Comments on 'The Undertaker's Daughter'

I loved this story. It was tragic, romantic, sexy and fun loving all at the same time. It was nice to read a story on this site that didn't center on the size of his cock and her tits. However, that's not to say that there aren't categories where that info is welcome in hotly anticipated stories (hint, hint). lol

A sweet and loving story in a most unexpected location! I enjoyed it very much.

your group appears to be splintered. If ten people in your group posted stories, you should have at least ten comments. I see no support for each other. I saw no promotion before the event. I suggest for your next event, all of those participating make comments on newly posted stories well ahead of the event. Make lots of funny and outrageous comments. Generate interest. Very few readers delve into Authors Hangout. You are simply bouncing it around among yourselves in there.

I comment on my friends stories when they post. I comment on new stories and write about the upcoming invitational. I annoy people, I entertain people, but all of it spreads the word for your event. Take a page from the Kardashians and promote your selves shamelessly. Readers will pay attention, Get into arguments and draw insults, Post nudes of your friends and claim they are you! Encourage each other. You

are all in it together!

This story had too much sadness, overall, to compete with the erotic content. Left me feeling kind of 'dead' - if you'll pardon the pun. One star.

Two things that are not often available. Very enjoyable story and I loved the motivations as much as anything. Thank you.

The story left me with a hope of happiness born in, and through, sadness, not in some sado-masochistic emotional torture, but through two lonely people finding each other in their own sadness to help each other.

Beautiful exploration of human comfort amidst loss and loneliness.

A beautiful story, beautifully told. Your name may be "Ruthless" but you write with plenty of ruth. Ruth is an old word for pity, sensitivity, caring.

And to top it off, the people are real. And they have good sex. And you have a light touch and humor. Thank you very much.

Another great work by a great author. The tone is much different but it takes the reader to a place where most of us don’t think possible. I do not see the sadness but the rebirth and vitality of two lost individuals who can grow together. Very descriptive and compelling.

Hi. I love your style but what turns me on is bdsm stories. Can you write one please. About a wife being slapped then fucked in the butt by her husband for coming home late after being fucked at work by her boss who gave her a spanking for being too rude. That's the kind of stories i wanna write but i dont have the gut to do so. Thnk you

This is art. I can see the cemetery and the characters, the pool. It’s unrealistic for someone to bounce back from tragedy that fast (the normal grieving period is 18 months) but that doesn’t really subtract from the story.

Man sees headstones for first time, and he smells wet pussy. WTF, give me a break.

I love this, it’s sweet and sad and real and erotic.

So short and yet, so perfect.

kind of an abrupt ending but well done...

Romantique, Sad, und Sweet!

11/10 Cups of Coffee!!!!!

Although regrettably short, this is a fine romance story, a most welcome departure for this excellent author. Perhaps LexxRuthless will consider writing more romance stories in the future. Five stars.