All Comments on 'The Unexpected Start of Love'

by Novengliae2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice neighbors work together

Very good 👍 story about two people. Not to fast or to slow ,great writing hope part two and maybe part 3 with other neighbors. That would be great ending.😁 thanks for the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

What a great first story! 5*

boatbummboatbummover 6 years ago
Terrific First Story!

Funny, tender, well-written and paced, sexy and sweet! Brings back memories of a similar setup when I was in my 30s and freshly divorced.... ;-)

Thanks for this one. Hope we get more from you in the days and weeks to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Unexpected start of love

Good, fun tale.

You do know it's FAZE not phase. Two different things.

sparktjsparktjover 6 years ago

Superb writing, so realistic, made me very hard. More please!

Johnny0432Johnny0432over 6 years ago
WELL HELLO!

I loved the story 5 stars isn't enough! Keep writing please.

AlGordonAlGordonover 5 years ago
Well written

Found this after your current posting - glad I looked. You captured quite well 'the lonely person who talks to himself' very well indeed, and the story 'works'.

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 4 years ago
Splendid

Absolutely fucking SPLENDID!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nicely done!

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Just your basic left-handed, frustrated, fiction writer-wannabe. Long, sensuous edging, dom talking during, expressing sympathy while not relenting...

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