All Comments on 'The Untouchable Ch. 02'

There will be a 3, 4, etc

Love this story!! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Loved it. I realize these are short stories interconnected, but I would hope you can finish this story before moving on.

Good stories even if there are the odd rough edges in the writing.

Your efforts and stories are appreciated.

- DK

You write good pulp. Short enough to keep my attention, stringing me along with the chapters. Hopefully I won’t have to wait another month for the next one. You’re better than you claim to be.

Love it, please more!!!!!

This is good stuff. It doesn't need editing, the rough edges add to the first person narrator being a rough ass. Besides, an editor might not live through it..........

Great story. Hope you finish it soon

You really need to write more John Smith stories!

we want more...

This was fun. Can’t wait till he meets Tony. Halter 3 coming????

Not one of his best, I wanted more. Great up to the end, when it didn't really end

We need more stories with this character

Come man, FTDS!

As much as I enjoyed this, I'd really like to see a third chapter. And, please quit slapping me with that fish...AHAHAHAHA. thanks again for your stories. S. F.

O M G ! Now I know when someone says, "You Left Me Hanging"! I've read the comments and I agree with everything positive. You could continue with this series, as long as your motivation and inspiration allow, and my interest will not wane.

THANKS !

I do so hope there is closure for this story.jyst love it.

*****Wow!! hoping for part two soon. This was a very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Sad, non ending, I love this character and wished more stories had been written about him. Sadly this one was going great, then it suddenly fell off a cliff..

4 stars for the missing ending

Good, should finish the story and get back to the corrupt Sherrif of part 1.

Needs a bit more. I do enjoy this character!

Lack of ending and no further chapters in months reduced from a 5* to 2*. I know you don’t actually give a sh*t but your biggest issue with writing is that they’re too short or unfinished. Start writing novel length and publish, I for one will buy!

Ouch! I love this pulp!

Continue please?

We need more John Smith!