All Comments on 'The Unusual Connection Pt. 02'

by mvball69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wonderful series... can wait for the next installment...

Great storie with an awesome build-up...

wylderoswylderosabout 8 years ago
Badly needs editing and proof-reading!

Story is interesting but the poor skills employed are definitely a distraction. You need to do the work necessary to create a good piece.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Always the same

Doesn't seem to be more of a connection than usual for a lap dance stripper. That's what she gets paid for.

kakwannkakwannabout 8 years ago
i had that "connection" last week...

if you go to strip-club occasionally, you will get this "feeling" about once or twice in your life. You feel weird afterward. If you stay at the club a bit, both of you are smiling in a weird way at each other. but you don't want to disturb her too much to let her work... You might even exchange facebook/phone numbers/real names. You really shared a great moment together, the way she was talking to you before during and after really made it intimate and you are still wondering : was she doing this to get a "regular" or if she was really into you? then you remember its her job... to sell dream, to sell phantasms, but you still can't get her out of your head... damn her :(

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