by Intact1
A bit of a "wham bam, thank you ma'am" entry. The previous 4 chapters had a really good build up to the "climax", and ever so slightly upped the stakes. This one seemed a bit rushed and really jumped into some hardcore stuff fast. Feels like an odd turn of events for the characters and where their unique relationship was heading
You're a great writer and I always look forward to your stories One of the reasons is that you have a very special interest that is illustrated in your stories. There are a million stories on this site about sex and handjobs and blow jobs. If someone is looking for something different all of that can get boring quickly.
That's where you and other writers like you come in. Your stories obviously appeal to a smaller audience, but for them your stories are gold. This story moved away from your usual theme toward something that can be found in so many other stories on here. I missed the clinical setting, the embarrassment, the medical fetish themes. I hope you'll write more about your special interest and leave the pure sex stories to lesser writers.
I always love your writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully you can write it quicker lol.
Don't listen to the haters, this installment was great too! Can't wait for the next one. :)
I'm grateful for all comments. And I agree with some who've said this is a departure from the theme of the series, not as exciting as the medical settings.
I know Literotica is picky with what they accept, but it'd be interesting to see multiple outcomes from each chapter, an alt ending if you will. Doubt you'd go back and write alt endings for the other chapters, but that'd def be worth reading. I think what I found the hottest in this and your other stories was the non-reluctance factor. Hope to see more stuff in the future.
I love this series!!!! I really hope you do continue to write more as I love when they come out and I hope you get some more out!!!!
I hope you are coming or with part six soon!! If so could you please let us know in the comments.
Actually, I've been through all this in my real life... Or through most
In the end, I got circumcised by my lover, who was a practicing MD, urologist... Let's see how will this story end.
If you are still writing, please finish the story, for a personal request, i would like him to get tricked into circumcition or finally agree with liz to getting circumcised, just one
more chapter please
I can’t wait for the next chapter. My sincere wish for Kiz to be able to circumcise him!