I like the way you write. If I could ask one thing of you? Could you make the chapters longer? Just get a good build up and the chapter is done.. great story. Keep up the good work!!
I am currently working on another non-human story of which I have written the first two chapters. It will be a shorter story which I will continue at a later date as I have two other stories that I want to share. I never quite know where my stories will go - they have a li...