All Comments on 'The Veil of Amethyst Ch. 02'

I like this for the beautiful sensuous descriptions of the characters' actions and the novel premise of this story. It's a nice idea that man and woman have to be joined in the ultimate union to perform at their best.

I hope you will continue this!

Thank you for commenting, I have two more chapters written already and I will post them after I have some time to go and edit them. Coming up are the origins of this unusual method of starcraft navigation as well as revelations about the origins of the story's title.