All Comments on 'The Very Strange Story'

To the author, Please spend a bit more time aquainting yourself with the English language and then try again. I simply could not pick up a thread of any kind of narrative from the words thrown together here.

English is a second language? Too many sentences with poor spelling or grammar. Don't give up because of me. Please consider an editor before publishing. You have talent which only needs a little refining in my opinion.

English is a second language and I as an American born englsh speaker loved reading it. You missed little or nothing, and in a very delightful way. Except at the end. I have to guess. It was he who ordered the painting. He needed no clients,no sponsors. He had all the money he needed to do as he pleased. She likes that, and she likes being taken beyond her comfort zone. A good, solid 4.