by Victoriajohn
This is a very nice tale indeed. This story shows it is possible to write a non-consent story where nobody really gets hurt and everything comes out right eventually. Nice job. Keep up the good work.
omggg that was very very hottttttttttttttttt....You are a very talented writer...smiles
patti
EXCELLENT!!!! A great second part to a great first story.
If the third is as good it will be a winner.
Thanks,
Joel
It hit the spot my wife and I both loved it keep writing, please finnish this story. We liked all of your stories so far!
I think that this is a true real life story nd it needs completion
too much talking in this episode. but, a tidy resolution. your characterization of shirley as a naive christian girl is the most realistic portrayal of the stereotype that i've seen--really well done.
a wonderful story with superior characterizations, and, most importantly, it is sexy, hot, arousing, exciting and even thought provoking. Should you ever decide to have the Vicar's wife tell more of her maturation, at least this and I am sure many other readers will want to read her further musings. She is a wonderful creation, intelligent, in touch, and so very HOT!
Sir, I just want to say what a well written well thought out story both parts kept me enthralled and excited, it made my tummy tingle and libido rise. I wished at times I was in Shirley's place. thank you sarahjmill@hotmail.co.uk. I was disappointed not to see a third part, I know it was some time ago, but maybe there is still time.
Sarah-Jane
She really enjoys sex and is beginning to teach her husband. Would love to see where she takes him. Seems that he is perfect for becoming a submissive cuckold.
Victoriajohn, Good Series. I think you can keep it going with lots of options. You left us with a great hook: "...appears to be vulnerable to the briefest stimulation". My personal preference is more description of Shirley's looks. Keep the stories coming.
I don't think you have exhausted the storyline. Would like a more detailed description of Shirley and the actual sex scenes like at the Club..as to how she was feeling. the different guys, etc. I may of missed it but am unsure about the size of her tits...anyway you left the readers with lots of possibilities for other Chapters.
Nicely done, with great writing.
Your embodiment of the protagonist was excellent.
I always knew I should have been a vicar wife!
Great story, please tell what happens next.
Anna