All Comments on 'The Views of May'

Good one, nice gentle 'first time' story. Well done. 5

My favorite stories tend to be those with an emotional component, as well as hot couplings. It doesn't hurt if those stories are well-written. Your story ticks all those boxes. Hopefully you'll continue this story because you've done such a good job creating interesting characters. I'd like to read more of their story and how things progress. 5/5*

Fantastic! Really well done. Erotic when it needed to be, thought-provoking at times and also funny. Thanks for sharing.

I really enjoyed your story! I enjoyed getting to know the people, I definitely have a thing for the outdoors and chance encounters. You have a talent for story telling and I hope you'll continue this one!