All Comments on 'The Village Of The Nanosensors'

You have an interesting idea. However, both this and the previous story are stripped too bare. Where is the background story? Each vignette needs more development. The 'report' is a seldom used device and is a great chance for you to add more to the overall story we readers could not know from the fly-on-the-wall moments watching the prisoners.

Keep writing. The more you do, the better you will get.