All Comments on 'The Virgin and the Prostitute'

Good story, I'm glad it worked out for both of them in the end.

I like stories like this where the characters are fleshed out a bit and are actual people rather than just mindless sex dolls. Good job!

The only thing that kept us from being five stars for me was the sudden and quick end. The beginning of the story was really put together it seems like you just ran out of juice and decided to close it down in three lines. Other than that great job.

Loved the story, sweet characters that weren't mindless sex machines.

You’re a good writer, but the epilogue was longer than the main part

Really enjoyed this story. Jeremy and Kimberley are decent people, and it was nice reading about their encounter. I liked the way they felt so comfortable with each other and were able to be each other's "firsts." A story in which the relationship is more interesting and more endearing than the sex itself.

Wonderful story! Hopefully, Though she always liked him, she'll love him and they'll have a wonderful life, including babies...

Great story have you ever thought of revisiting the story and giving the end bit a lot more flesh on the bones as the bit where they started actually dating could really be fleshed out a lot and explain how it changed from sex to sex and love to pure love expressed by really making love to each other and how they completed each other’s life’s and maybe how they had a family together and grew old together but you really wrote a well rounded begin and middle so it’s a pity you never wrote a well rounded end section perhaps this is because you ran out of steam but I think and feel that if you read it over and thought about it you could really flesh it out a lot may be even stretch the middle section a bit and do yourself and us a real favour and turn this good story into a really great story I know you can do this because the fist part was a really great start the middle very good but the ending not disappointing but a great ending stifled a great deal so a poor finish why not revisit this wonderful story and make it one of the all time greats on this site but congratulations on what is the star of what could be a really great story Because of the promise I see in this story I give it a 5 start rating instead of the 4 star perhaps it deserves at this present time so as I’m showing great faith in you please at least reread this story through again before making a decision not to rewrite it as I really hope after reading it you will have renewed inspiration and juice and feel the same way as me and rewrite a great story into a Brilliant one All the very Best Hayboys

@hayboys Thank you. I have thought about giving it a rewrite, I do have some ideas of how to improve it. Maybe in time I'll revise it.

A very enjoyable read. Towards the end I wanted to have them get together, and you made it happen.

Once a slut, always a slut. A depressing, sordid little tale that is a vivid reminder of how shallow promiscuity and bought sex really is. No love after that can ever be pure or genuine. Quite simply, if a little crudely written, though.

"Jeremy and Kimberley are decent people"?! Really? They're not! He's a feeble and shallow beta male, and she's a grubby 'retread' slut. A sad and shallow life. The last reviewer is spot on with his/her comment. Quite well written, though, if perhaps a little naive.