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All Comments on 'The Virgin Delivery Girl Teases'

by nylonpunkie

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sirhugssirhugsover 3 years ago
Loved It

In spite of the sad ending.

Well written, clever word play (Led Zeppelin drumbeat...mmmm) , likeable protagonist, lots of dialogue.

Mature guy gets lucky with young woman is right in my wheelhouse. Too bad he turned out to be a cad.

AlicemoonAlicemoonover 3 years ago
Well Done!

I really liked the time you took to create a detailed, specific world and two vivid characters. I felt emotionally invested in what happened to them besides being...well, turned on! ;)

HragsHragsover 3 years ago
MORE...MORE...MORE

I would absolutely hope u continue this story, you sure have something here.

VisitorAnonVisitorAnonover 2 years ago

Lovely story. Sexy and enjoyable. Hope there's more.

nylonpunkienylonpunkieover 2 years agoAuthor

Some lovely feedback here, thanks to all who take a moment to share their thoughts with me, xx

MaleMid50sUKMaleMid50sUK7 months ago

Great story and well written

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Gothic middle-aged mum with a few kinks (pantyhose and nylons, dirty aromas and mean ol' grandpas). I like reading the filthy stories here and I'm trying to get better at telling my tales, I have published a few here if you fancy a read.