All Comments on 'The Virgin Unbirth'

Not bad, though I would like to see just how the situation pans out. Every man has a limit as to how far he can go, at least in Keith's situation. I would like to know how long the carriers would remain normal before further complications arise.

I'll be awaiting the sequel. Hope you make use of the lactation mentioned in this story in the later installments.

Le J the un-eloquent says: this story is an absolute must-read. You're an inspiration, Ogg.

I really liked this story. It was one of the most unique stories I've yet read in erotic literature. Good suspense, fascinating plot twists. I hope you write more. I'd like to hear details about his escapades with the other three naked roommates. And I love that it mentioned some foot sex. Can't beat the beauty and allure of naked female feet.

I felt this story was well told and it met my "fetish" needs. I wish the story line could continue but, some stories are best left where they are I suppose. So I rate this story a 4/5.

could you possibly convert it toy american measurements? if so could you send it to my email, its alhstmi@gmail.com

Man I'm speechless that fufilled ever fantasy i could ever have with women and he now has five attractive one. Wow i love it and i would love to have more!

Very well done! I enjoyed the story very much! You, my friend, have a future in writing.