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by Leanne_sissy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more!

More!

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiabout 9 years ago
Story?!? What story?

...Are you going to write one??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Yes, more. IMMEDIATELY!

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Great start!

Please continue! And you said above this happened for real?!! I'm more than a little aroused and curious to see what happened. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More like an opening paragraph

than a story. What? Did you run out of ideas?

Leanne_sissyLeanne_sissyabout 9 years agoAuthor
Story?

Yes of course it continues and of course it is an opening paragraph, reasons are, I've never published on Literotica before and I wanted to see if this start interested people. I always write in chapters and I shall add more paragraphs to this one as I have time. And yes many of my stories including this one, are based on experience.

Love Leanne x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Dear sweet Leanne

Yes, dear sweet Leanne, I want to hear the rest of the story. Keep going, Leanne.

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 9 years ago
more please

A nice start and good writing.. please continue

SumacandIvySumacandIvyabout 9 years ago
Off to a Good Start

Well written and full of promise. I'm ready for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yes!

A nice start...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please allow me the privilege to please you

Submissive curious male looking to be used contact me at pitpowder@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please do this to me

Just text me at 704-320-1272 and mention this story. Hopefully we can work something out. I hope to submit to you soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes, more, please!!

JiminNCJiminNC7 months ago

LeAnne, dear, why are you using the male pronoun He?

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