All Comments on 'The Vita Tanks'

A very interesting idea; I look forward to the second part!

It's a good read and I think you have a brilliant idea, but I'm not sure where it's ex/voy. This feels much more like a sci-fi or even a control or bdsm story. I hate to say it won't be too well recieved in this section, but we'll see what happens. It's a great start to something that can be developed. Keep going.

Very creative story. I am looking forward to hear where it goes from here. Please continue writing!

Very sexy and original story. It's good to see something a bit different. I hope there's a Part II.