All Comments on 'The Voice in the Dark Ch. 01'

There needs to be more of this. Soon.

I can’t make any promises as to when, but I’m looking forward to writing the next part. ☺️

...reads like a hot fudge sundae...contrasting tastes, hot, cold, cherry on top. Sexy and well done. Nellskitchen

It's so lovely to know that something I have worked hard on has been worth it. :)

Wow... how wonderful.

This is a heart-pumping, filled with emotional and sexual tension. The story is both believable and unpredictable. As an aspiring writer, it’s amazing to spot how character of Jess changes through the emotions she experiences. Ravenna you really have done refinement of those emotions into feelings, and the evolution in self-awareness.

This gradual metamorphosis has created the story’s internal arc. I felt you were providing the character an opportunity to move step-by-step from being at the mercy of her emotions to mastering her feelings. I am still learning to write and don’t know if I may say so but I believe this emotional journey is the spirit of fiction.

I also loved how other characters are described and brought to life through concise backgrounds. Wow. Your thoughtful, introspective kinda prose is so captive that I didn’t want to stop reading, but sadly the story ended.

So badly, I wish someday, I can also write this well, but equally I wish Ravenna writes the other part… I am eagerly waiting. Please do write Ravenna.

Excellent . I loved its flow

I am so happy that my stories are good to read and that my hard work has paid off. It wasn’t easy to write but it was definitely something I needed to finish.

Working on the next part, no promises as to when but soon I hope.

I’m also very much still learning how to write and therefore I have a long way to go until I can consider myself one but I am so glad that what I have produced makes you want to keep reading.

You guys are just amazing 😍