All Comments on 'The Wager Ch. 02'

Yes, the pizza boy was a poor choice to add to the story. While we all know this is fantasy, but it's about the two of them, nobody else. You "jumped the shark" by having the pizza boy there, and it happened so early. You could have built a nice emotional, yet sexy story, but you went too far with the pizza boy...weak.

I 'm enjoying this story. Was dissappointed they didn't do more with the pizza boy's big cum shots. Maybe hubby should've wiped his fingers through the cum and had her lick it off, or she could have been encouraged to play with it. Either way, it would have added to the "slut" image he's trying to work on. He should be willing to get into it more as well. But, I like the story.

and able to get off on it. TK U MLJ LV NV

Poorly conceived and even more poorly written. Don't post any more.

Those who can't say anything constructive and can't sign their name shouldn't be listened to. Thanks for sharing your talent! Good story and there is room for more chapters...hint!

So you think that commenting as "boaman007" counts as "signing your name"? I don't think so.

good story. keep it coming, if you know what I mean.

Unfortunately I think it's been abandoned :(