All Comments on 'The Waif and the Wall'

Very Enjoyable

Decent story - liked the developing relationship and their dialogue. And the sex was hot!

Total surprise. Well done.

Very good. Character development excellent and noticed no editing problems.

Keep it up. More.

Thanks everyone for your kind comments! I really appreciate it and it encourages me to write more. This was just an odd little story I had been playing around with and wasn't even going to post it. Very glad to know people have enjoyed it.

I have read all of your stories so far and really enjoy your writing style! I have read a lot of stories over the years and I have to say, you are the best author so far!

How could there not be? Please, I want to know how these two develop - and if they invite someone else to their bed. Love the story. Thanks.

When I read this story it was a real turn on. I like to read adult comics that are similar. The ones that are realy popular though are the ones where the small woman or even a full size woman get screwed by a big dick that's so huge it gives them a stomach bulge. I imagined that is what happened to the small lady.

I have now read all your stories and I like this the best, but now I want more. Your threesome's are so tender, it would be lovely to hear what happens when Amanda joins them ;)

Something about this really hit me, an instant favorite.

Thank very much for the nice comment, JarlLee. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

very good story, not the usual rape or stupid drama that comes with these types of stories. Very well written!

Loved it!!........please continue.

More please!!

your words match my dream ... years ago, she’s barely 5’ with angelic face and a smile that made my heartrate double. thanks for refreshing my dream.

Her name was Becky. She was a fiery redhead, perfectly formed, sexy as Hell, lived in Squires. She couldn't have been more than 5'2". She was way out of my league, plus a couple of years ahead in school. She'd be mid '60s now. But I remember. As my Grandma would say, she was little but "oh my!" She had a big raucous personality. Thanks for stirring up a sweet memory!

What I wouldn’t give to be Beth! Absolutely love it.

So that's how it works. I knew there was a trick to it, and Beth had a great answer.

A thoroughly enjoyable story. Perhaps you'll write a sequel?

A nice love story dear

I would love to read more about these characters.

All of your stories are fun and unique. Please keep writing. You have a lot of talent as a storyteller.

GHreader

Thanks very much, GHreader!

I dunno why this story has been so popular. I tried writing a sequel but it fell flat. Maybe I'll try again.

I'm a big guy, so I really enjoyed the physical disparity aspect. Beth makes a neat character, the feisty aspect is sexy. Read part 2 first, HAD to see how it started. I look forward to reading more from you. Good job

Thanks, LustyScribe (awesome username, btw). Glad you enjoyed the story. It was fun to write.

Believable characters and situation(s) are a definite plus for me as well as hot sex.

I hope Beth and Jonas have a wonderful relationship (marriage?), and will save any comments about bringing the roommate into the mix until after I read part 2.

Thanks again, Cagonzon! Yes, petite girls are very compelling, especially when feisty. Beth in this story is one of my favorite characters.

Wow this was hot. I loved both Beth and Jonas. Can’t wait to see what they’ll come up with, when the roommate joins in.

The first time two of my best mates got together, she admitted how lame there sex was, he's 7 foot 300lbs, she's 5'5" an I doubt 120 lbs wet. He's a gentle giant in bed, and she wants him to use his full weight on her, not hold back. She wants to be crushed by him, and he wants to be soft and delicate. the frustration must have been almost as bad as me listening to it!

My favorite story so far... probably because I'm a big guy, have enjoyed petite girls, and related to all of this. But, I feel like both of these characters could be developed more - in kind of an "us against the world" mindset. Nonetheless, you really allow the reader to inhabit a character. Thank you for providing such great erotic stories.

delete the last line, stop there, and this is a great story. As is, just another wannabe harem story. Just can't stop yourself.

Uhh, Beth is utterly adorable as fuck jeeze <3

She sure is, InfiniteXaos. One of my favourite characters. But don’t let Beth hear you call her adorable… she might punch you out :-)