All Comments on 'The Wanderer'

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TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
An interesting beginning of a story.

At the height of the Black Death, a mysterious encounter ...

I think it can be an interesting beginning of a romantic, albeit dramatic story.

Waiting for the next chapter.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
good start

This is an excellent start. The use of descriptive language gives me hope that the finished story will become a publication quality story that I can have my boyfriend read to me as a form of foreplay.

RasmatRasmatover 7 years ago
An excellent beginning.

Hope to see more soon.

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