by AlinaX
Excellently written, I absolutely loved it, long time WotW reader & fan (except Tom Cruise version ugh), I’m hoping for a follow up from her child’s pov, please? Morals/tentacles/Midwich Cuckoos etc.
A story so phenomenally well-rendered that, despite the content not being normally in my wheelhouse, I was helpless to read to the end. Great job.
Thanks for the comments! I enjoyed trying to capture the spirit of the original here. I'll have a think about follow-ups.
I felt the ending was a little weak, but the erotic horror tone was generally good.
That opening paragraph was so good. Riffed off of HG's original story perfectly.
5*. I greatly enjoyed this story.
Really enjoyed this story, especially after coming straight off the back of reading the original. I felt the ending was a bit rushed though, would have loved a bit more to this story! Still a 5* effort though