All Comments on 'The War of the Worlds'

by AlinaX

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PurplefizzPurplefizzover 2 years ago

Excellently written, I absolutely loved it, long time WotW reader & fan (except Tom Cruise version ugh), I’m hoping for a follow up from her child’s pov, please? Morals/tentacles/Midwich Cuckoos etc.

WinsomeWebWinsomeWebover 2 years ago

A story so phenomenally well-rendered that, despite the content not being normally in my wheelhouse, I was helpless to read to the end. Great job.

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments! I enjoyed trying to capture the spirit of the original here. I'll have a think about follow-ups.

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

I felt the ending was a little weak, but the erotic horror tone was generally good.

ContrahentContrahentover 2 years ago

That opening paragraph was so good. Riffed off of HG's original story perfectly.

5*. I greatly enjoyed this story.

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you. I'm glad to see this odd story getting some appreciation.

Naughtydj69Naughtydj69over 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this story, especially after coming straight off the back of reading the original. I felt the ending was a bit rushed though, would have loved a bit more to this story! Still a 5* effort though

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I like writing stories that are erotic without sacrificing plot and character. I like pushing consensual boundaries. I like novelty and I like perversity... Anyone wishing to do audio versions of my stories is welcome to do so - but please acknowledge the source and send me a...