All Comments on 'The Warmest Winter, Day 08'

by TooCleverByHalf

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random_librarianrandom_librarianalmost 11 years ago
The scene is getting set...

... for much more to come. Starting a business, local small-town intrigue, does someone have it in for our hero. So many directions for this story to go in.

And that fact, that there are many possible avenues, could not make me happier, because it implies there may be a lot left to this tale. For that, I am immeasurably grateful.

In other words, thank you, and keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
suspicion

i don't know if it merits anything, but my guess is his ex-fiance is somehow involved in the new laws and such (or her family is) - in any case, good read, cant wait for next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Thanks

Another great chapter more soon please.

Best wishes in anticipation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Thank you

Is it wrong I am becoming more interested in the land/park stuff than the sex? Don't get me wrong, love the way you have written the sex, but am really interested in seeing where the other is going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent!

Really good build up. I love how everyone is getting shaken up and I can see the clouds in the distance. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
time

Really wish writing wasn't such a tedious task. Takes far to long for chapters. Really enjoy the entire story to date. Thanks.

cittrancittranalmost 11 years ago
Ch 9 submitted?

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.

:D

fanfarefanfareover 10 years ago
a thunk comes to me

"...intellectuals being the best lovers...."

I like to think that I am better then that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hum...

Maybe bad old golddigger isnt actually dead. Or maybe its her parents taking vengeance. Anyway very interesting plot. Love it actually.

Lions86Lions86almost 2 years ago

whydoyou not space outwordssomtimes? Do see how annoying that is to read? I like the story, but stuff like that over, and over, and over, is annoying honestly

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