All Comments on 'The Warrior's Reluctant Bride Pt. 02'

Why must woman be treated as property all the time. It’s sad

And of course she turns into a doormat while he remains a complete dickhead.

Well done! Keep it up. I would love to read a spin off.

'reprimand' in common usage during the bronze age, then? Amusing.

This was SUCH a good story! I feel like Raina and Asim’s story could have been continued just a little bit. Sad to see it end.

Excellent story! Please continue!

Oh my God! I read the first one ages ago and today when I clicked "now stories" and saw this, I was so thrilled! This is a beautiful story! Thank you thank you thank you! Your write beautifully, I love the attention to detail! Ignore the people gripping about her being his property. Personally I find it the sexiest thing ever when my partner growls "mine" against my skin. If they don't like the type of story, why the hell did they read it? Literotica has plenty of stories with Domme heroins. This story is perfect!

What???? This is finished?? Ooohhh... more please. The characters just started to develop and bond.

In a way I'm glad it's finished as there are way too many unfinished stories in this site, but I'm also disappointed at the same time. I wish it's a lot longer as I really enjoyed reading it. I did read part 1 when it came out and really glad you continued, but I do really wish you developed it further. I guess short and sweet is better than unfinished.

Thank you for sharing and finishing it.

5 stars from me.

Thanks for a great story. Definitely looking forward to the spin off.

Thanks for this wonderful update and looking foward to the spin off story!

I hope that’s not the end of their story! Do they eventually fall in love? Does he end up killing Marin?

As others have said this cannot be their end!

I never read stories this long, but yours has captured me! Thank you

OMG! that was so awesome!!!!!!!!! I hope you write more of their story. Just to wrap it up and tie up some loose ends. Especially how these two end up. Although you say it is finished it feels more like you left us still hanging. Holy mackerel you are a great story teller and honestly this needs more of a finish. I don't know if I could read any of your other stories now in fear of becoming really invested in the story and plot only to be left unfulfilled again. It's your fault for being that good of a story teller!!! :-)

Yes, please keep writing this story, it's so good! I'm also glad that you're doing a spinoff too. You're a great writer!

Great story! Very well rounded. There are several spelling errors but it didn’t detract too much.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Please continue with the Warrior.

raina needs to be put into her place and apologize to asim. she’s been acting so foolishly and even towards the end still thinks of marin. i would’ve wanted to see a realization from her and her realizing how good asim is to her

This is a great story. I hope that you'll give it one more chapter before moving onto Freya's spinoff!

I loved this story.

And I'd love to read about Freya and Rukh. Theirs would be a very different story because they are very different characters.

Now that you've created the world, you can travel back to it again and again with new stories. For example, I'd love to see Raina's sharp tongue mix with regal posture to show that she is her husband's equal in leadership when someone (the third tribe?) says something inappropriate in front of the Kirilli. Maybe around the fire. Asim would be so proud of her.

Looking forward to reading about Freya and Rush and hope that Raina was able to meet her duties as the chieftains wife.

I demand more of little miss viper and her Mr. Mamma bear