All Comments on 'The Way of War Pt. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More Please.....

Please don't leave us eager readers waiting too long for the next chapter. Your stories are some of the best on this site. I will be checking daily for Part 10 of this epic adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just right

I think this is my favorite of your three stories so far. It has just the right amount of eroticism blended with action. "The Tides of War" was an excellent action tale and "The Boys in Blue" was very sexual. As of Capter 9, the mix is just right.

IntruderjamesIntruderjamesover 5 years ago
Tides

Great story so keep it up... I am sorry to be able to write this.

The Mediterranean Sea has for all intent no actual tidal fall or rise.

There is a slight deviation but this is never much more than a meter (3ft).

I have sailed swum and dived pretty much all if the med and so know this from first

Hand knowledge.

There is a phenomena of the water level "tilting" during a strong lasting wind

But once again it is negligible.. Hope of some interest to you. Regards J

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story line !!!

This is a really good follow up story to your earlier writings. Please continue to post more chapters an other stories on here. I greatly enjoy reading them, Thank you again !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding

This is an excellent description of the difficulty of operations in the desert and the effect of long supply lines in the North Africa war. The characters are good as is the romance between Ramage and Sarah

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