All Comments on 'The Way of War Pt. 10'

You did not disappoint! Great chapter....too short though. Thanks for the writing a great story.

Really enjoyed the story in total. But, the last chapter I thought wasn't on par with the previous 9. Kind of had the feeling you wanted to wrap up this story, resulting in cutting this chapter a little short. Covered lots of ground here, but this chapter didn't feel as detailed and missed the intimacy between the main characters as the previous chapters. Anyway I think you're a gifted writer and I enjoy your work.