All Comments on 'The Way You Look At Me Ch. 02'

by Nyhtfall

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dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
So lovely

Going back to read about Dad and Poppy now :) i loved their story too

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loving the story..

And the 2 off them. I'm just a bit confused about Daniel and how keen he is after he had been attacked by his father. Would he not be a bit nervous? Surely telling Aiden about this might be best first and the sorts of things he had done to him.

NyhtfallNyhtfallover 10 years agoAuthor
In regards to Daniel

Interestingly, victims of abuse do not always shy away from contact. Some will attempt to relive the abuse as a way of punishing themselves. A good example of this are those who are abused and then end up being promiscuous later in life. Then there are those who don't let it hold them back. These are of course generalizations.

There's also things in Daniel's past that haven't been revealed yet that will explain his behavior a bit better, but that's not for another chapter or two. ;)

wawferwawferabout 10 years ago
Love it

this is a really nice story, I love it. I cant wait till you update it! Thank you for the story, please dont stop writing, lol it is really sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Masochism Turns Semi-casrtrated readers on!

Keep this beautiful 'CFNM' story UP: Literally.

SilverSilhouetteSilverSilhouetteabout 10 years ago

Really enjoying the story so far....can't wait 4 the next 25 chapters! XP

fantastic author....

jackfrost626jackfrost626over 9 years ago
nooooooo!

MORE PLS!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY !!!!!

yepsowhatifiamyepsowhatifiamover 9 years ago
Bravo!

Love it! Can I have more please??

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
beautiful but

It's beautiful but u left too much open

ilovegibbsilovegibbsover 8 years ago
More please???

Oh what a wonderful story. I love these two together almost as much as Josh and Evan. Please continue their story???

PleasepleasePleasepleaseover 7 years ago
Wow

I just love it when an author includes reality based issues in their stories. Excellent job handling the abuse. Definitely right on how victims and survivors handle the trauma and aftermath differently.

baikalisanbaikalisanover 7 years ago
What a shame

That this story wasn't finished. I hope all is well with you and that you re-evaluate and continue this story. I really like these boys and would like to know how their lives went

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

where is the rest of this story its really great

ilovegibbsilovegibbsover 3 years ago
Great story, so far.

I've read this story multiple times and I've enjoyed it. But its not finished, is it? Where is the next chapter? Are you still working on it?? You've left us hanging here!😭😭😭😭😭 lol.

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