All Comments on 'The Wedding Proposal Ch. 01'

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xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel0about 1 year ago

A lovely start, but so many questions. I hope they are answered in part 2. What is his/her name? Bridemaids to help? What happens next? You are a tease. Can't wait to find out what happens. luv Chloe

vickiebonnevickiebonneabout 1 year ago

You tease! Impatiently waiting for the rest!

EricaDoesNowEricaDoesNowabout 1 year ago

VERY nice, and proof that every story does not need to be filled with sex. Thanks!

marciepmarciepabout 1 year ago

Let’s be honest. We come to this site for smut. But I gave this smut-free short 5 stars because it just feels like a great beginning to a story I want to know more about.

_Rosemary__Rosemary_about 1 year ago

A nice start; can't wait for th rest.

KatiwantsKatiwantsabout 1 year ago

Very beautiful story!!!

I wish I could be so lucky!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice start, but why didn’t you write more?

DividenceDividenceabout 1 year agoAuthor

So many kind and encouraging words. Makes my belly tingle.

Rest assured, smut is coming. Carefully portioned out. I have tried to keep it from interfering too much with the story.

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 1 year ago

Please continue, I can almost feel what she(he) does 😊

Kathryn65Kathryn65about 1 year ago

Loved this can’t wait for the next chapter, delicious xxx

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonabout 1 year ago

Very nice, can't wait to read the rest, thanks for sharing...

Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Pantiesabout 1 year ago

Lovely beginning. Every CD’s fantasy is to be a bride. I can imagine myself in the character’s Victorian, white leather boots with 5-inch heels, laced up the front and decorated with pearls and seams. Vivid descriptions like these always put me in the right frame of mind.

Of course, sex is good, too. 😉. But just like the real act, sometimes, the build up can be just as satisfying. Love this. 💕

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

He is one lucky young guy It's a fantastic story I hope it doesn't turn back

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