All Comments on 'The Wedding Proposal Ch. 03'

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KatiwantsKatiwantsabout 1 year ago

So beautiful 😍

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 1 year ago

Oh wow 😁 I felt like I could almost see and hear them getting hot and sweaty like the newlyweds that they are .. I do hope that there is more storyline to come 🤗 😘

Kathryn65Kathryn65about 1 year ago

Utterly Scrumptious story from start to finish , will there be more please!! .

Just a slight mistake once our Heroine has taken off her panties she then can’t feel them being restrictive ! Otherwise brilliant xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I loved so much this story! And i feel very envious and jealous!!

I would like to be in her shoes!!

Please, continue!!

Patricia169Patricia169about 1 year ago

delicipus story, hope to read more soon ! :)

DividenceDividenceabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Kathryn65.

I've corrected the mistake. Sometimes I get to carried away when writing and proof reading ;)

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