All Comments on 'The Wedding Reception'

By another socially undeveloped and emotionally challenged author.

There should be a small bit of believability to any tale guess what? You miss buy several miles. Juvinile is a good description.of your mess.

Enjoyed it. Well written and exciting.

Nice fantasy. Loved the build up to the conclusion. I hope there are some more chapters to this story.

My sweet anonymous,

I thought that I could find you again by posting a new story. The last time we got together, after you told me you had wandered onto this amateur erotica site "accidentally" in search of your favorite "family values" forum, I thought how fortuitous it was that chance had brought us together. But I suspected you'd be back for more, even over your protestations to the contrary!

How I enjoyed our precious moments. I'm sorry if you were left a little bit unfulfilled on our last encounter, but that was your darling wife's choice, not mine. She said that she was trying to get to 'know' as many emotionaly challenged writers as possible before she finally relieved you of your chastity, and it sounds from the tension in your comment as though she is still adding to the total.

Still, you must be getting plenty of nutrients from your devotional tongue-bathing of her after her lovers are done. That was my favorite memory, really, of our special visit. You were so selfless, so thorough in the way that you carefully licked and swallowed every last drop, as though you really enjoyed it. She seemed to really appreciate your devotion and I know someday, maybe soon, she will reward you by allowing you to add your own love juices to the mix, or at least on the floor beneath her feet.

I know her calendar is probably full these days with other juvenile, socially undeveloped writers (though she certainly enjoyed my physical 'overdevelopment' a the time! wink, wink) who write pile of shit stories (after all, there are so many of us to choose from here on Literotica), but if she ever wants to get back in touch, she has my number!

Much love,

Pervin

You stoop to the anon level? Whats with that? If you ask me it makes you sound desparate. Tirade was unfunny and basically uncalled for but its your gig so have at it BTW The story was well written I liked it Gave it a four. The tirade gets a one

The final climax was well executed though I'd have preferred a vaginal creampie from the bald lover!

The development and exposition of the character of Sweetie and the things Our Narrator and Hubby let us know about himself established them very well. I DID think the several times Hubby oiled the skids for the Bald Bull were a bit excessive, especially the last time! On the other hand, treating a relative's wedding reception like a swinging club get-together is a bit brazen, and I understand the Sisters' unhappiness! Especially after screwing up last time Sweetie was unleashed there!

Long build-up, fast pitch and a touch-down plus conversion! (Sorry for sports mixup)!

4*

This was a GREAT build up story. I love it. I only wished the actual sex was longer......would you consider doing a part 2? Maybe with the husband watching from the side this time and getting more jealous. It would be great to have a lemon add-on to this great story. :)

wonder what would happen if they found a medication to fix that mental miscalculation

I am going to have my husband read this when he gets home. There won't be another man of course but I can fantasize. He can seduce me like she was. His love doll ill be and do just what he wants.

Oh and to the cucks have found an author comment? Where can I get some of that medicine? Because I would so like to become a miserable fucking stupid troll with nothing more to do than make pathetic remarks about other people's opinions. Would I have to move straight into mommy's basement when I was cured?

Personally, I found the first half - the teasing, the dancing on the edge of the bonfire - more convincing than the second half, where their marriage is actively at risk.

Hot and very sexy story!

I fantasized this was my wife and me.

Got me hard and horny and I am writing with a hard and wanting cock.

Thanks for the fantasy and please add an second chapter.

Joe

And a poor, dumb cuckold discovers the road to divorce. Dumb idea.

I have a hard time believing a woman, any woman, on what is one of the most important days of her life, would want to remember the day she was a HUGE slut. Even for fiction, this was both unbelievable and implausible. And your writing did nothing to convince me she would act the way she did. UGH!

All the idiots, if you don't like it, why are you reading it, move on. I was at a wedding,, I got friendly with a couple who had come over from the U.K, I had not met before, they were older, in their 60s, I am 48. He didn't dance, so he said would I mind dancing with his wife, I did, Yvonne was very nice,,as the night went on, we had a few laughs and at the final dance she said to me, if Ray asks you back to our room, please say yes.At the end of the night, I saw Yvonne talking to Ray and he came over to me and said, we have our room here, we would like it if you came back for a drink. o.k.In the room, Ray got me a drink and Yvonne said, let me get out of this dress and she took it off right there. That's better as she stood there in her stockings and bra, Ray stood and moving behind her, released her bra, her breasts dropped out.They looked at me ,and said if you want to leave, that's fine, if you want to stay and watch, we like that but we would really like you to join in.I didn't move as Ray removed his clothes and sat down and Yvonne knelt, her shaved pussy in full view, and began sucking Rays cock. I stood, removed my clothes, my cock standing out, I moved behind her, looked at Ray, he nodded and I moved my cock up and down her slit, she widened her legs, Ray handed me a tube of lube, you may need that to start. I put some on the head of my cock, rubbed it up and down her slit and slowly pushed into her, she kept sucking him as I began to fuck her pussy which soon got very wet. Ray held her head, fuck her, give it to her, that's it, she can take it as I moved in and out, I heard Ray say,yes, yes, that's it, swallow it all as he emptied into her mouth. Her pussy was wet now, I felt her gripping me, Ray said lets move onto the bed, she loves doggy, so we helped her up, me still in her and she was on all fours on the bed as I grabbed her hips and hammered her as I felt her pussy spasm, she started to scream but Ray pushed his cock back into her mouth as she orgasmed and my cumm flooded her pussy. I held onto her hips then pulled out. Ray pulled back, marvelous those blue tablets he said as he lay down and lowered her just fucked pussy onto his cock, she moaned as he kept her there. I moved to her face,she took my semi hard cock, could she suck, no wonder Ray came so quick, I got hard, Ray said take the lube, she loves it in the pussy and arse at the same time. I got behind her, a nice round arse, I couldn't resist, I reamed her hole slowly with my tongue, all I heard was Ray, hes licking me, so good,ohh and Ray saying put your cock in her or I am going to cumm now. I put some lube on her hole and on the thick head of my cock. I placed my cock at her entrance and my cock got sort of engulfed by her anus, it felt like she was sucking me in until I was all the way inside her and I felt her shudder and Ray said oh my god, she just wet all over me. He told me not to move as he began to move in and out, it felt strange, I could feel his cock move inside her. Then he said your turn and he stayed deep inside her as I gently fucked her arse, he said don't stop and he began fucking her at the same time, I cant help it he said and I felt the pulses as he came then kept his cock firmly in her pussy. I fucked her harder, faster, Ray said my god she keeps soaking me as she moved on his cock my cock pistoning in her faster, her insides milking me as I released deep into arse which caused her to scream and buck as I could smell the release of urine as she said I cant help it and orgasmed hard. I pulled back, my cock soft and sat down.He pulled out of her, she slumped on the bed and he said now how about that drink.

Damn that was so Fucking hot!

Excellent story, nice build up. 5 stars

How does dancing lead to making your wife a whore?

What if they became regular , it would certainly be safer ? I think also it could begin to tap other struggling emotions in them all , perhaps he's not such a nice guy at some point he would try to cut the husband out behind his back , or if she did meet with him without telling the husband she could be blackmailed ? Why not give it another go ? As for the how could this go to being a whore , my wife and I did this for a very long time , a whore no way , maybe a wife who enjoys fulfilling her husbands fantasy . You start somewhere just like this couple and that's how we did it the first time after that I would only watch my wife of our small city from afar which served to heighten our time together for weeks each time . The other thing was being well known in our community and my flawless long legged red head was well out of the league of most and was seen as untouchable . Part of the thrill was no man knew about the others thinking they were only the second man to ever kiss her , then maybe work up to second base the first time he thought he had seduced her and all of them were married . The greater part was knowing the men and knowing (watching) what he had done and having heared their conversations , they all seemed to have a smugness about them they may not of realized but surprisingly none ever had shown any guilt for cheating on their friend with his wife and cheating on their own . We would eventually have her break it off saying she was feeling guilty . Even today 20 years later when we see a X lover in a restaurant or somewhere its a real turn on as she plays out the uncomfortable but longing looks continuing to build " the best lover she's ever had " ego while she can easily compete with any woman , and could of had any married man for a lover .

My own wife knows that when I tell her to wear a short dress, a garter belt, no bra and otherwise casual footwear - that she will be strutting her stuff, as an available piece of ass for a horny stranger I talked to earlier that day. She knows that she is on display

as a local hot wife and a stranger will approach her and say "Hello" in a nearby mall or a pub. We have sometimes met neighbors along the way who are unaware we are taking her out to get her fucked. His "Hello!" lets her know he is claiming her pussy and within an hour she will naked and reaching down to feed his cock into her hungry hole. She is a wonderful wife and a loves pleasing horny men.

The story sucked, but all the anonymous me too fantasies are hilarious.

Yep, often the comments are better reading than the actual stories in loving wives, especially the willing cuckold tales.

especially from the author of this garbage. Always did say, if the story sucks, at least the comments will keep you laughing. LOL Keep on writing author, love the comments your stories get, priceless.

Exceedingly well-written; thoughtful, well-paced and spot on timing as well as inspired moments to "keep the train on track" could not have been better - different, but not better. Adults behaving as adults; a married couple having discussed and been fully aware of each other's position, limits and needs, proceeding jointly with timely communication, confirmation and honesty - accepting the common goal and experiencing the thrill, the pleasure and the excitement of succumbing to the sexual rapture in breaching societal (and possibly personal, to date) norms and taboos.

Will the partners continue to successfully hold to their marriage and each other with honesty and fealty remains to be seen. That is the risk inherent not only in dangerous behavior, but in life itself. Life is about exploring, experiencing, pushing boundaries and even on occasion crossing rubicons.

On a balance of probabilities, there was nothing to indicate regret or dissatisfaction or hurt or altered values or commitments - or basis in same - with either or between the loving spouses. I wish them wellness and prosperity with continued love and lust and pleasure - whether in reality or in fantasy.

Thank you for an excellent story!

Erotic as hell! Couldn't get to the end without cumming!

Thanks.

Great story. I have similar thoughts about my wife.