All Comments on 'The Wedding - The Funeral'

by Just Plain Bob

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chytownchytownover 13 years ago
I can see why!!

They changed it !!!!!!!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
Damn Bob, this is depressing

Poor Henry. What he didn't know didn't hurt him, but you have to feel sorry for the poor bastard.

It would be a living hell to be married to a gang bang queen like this slut and know about it.

Thanks for the read.

bobby9909bobby9909over 13 years ago
Same as Coming and Going

Bob,

You've posted this one twice. Coming and Going is the same story...

reemartreemartabout 13 years ago
Thanks!

Thanks for the chuckle, I didn't see it coming though I should have I guess. I've read most of your stories from before 2010 and though I don't always agree with you, I always enjoy your writing. So just wanted to say thanks.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Horrible

I gave it a 1

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
What?

Disgusting. Only in fiction could people like this really exist.

firas01firas01over 11 years ago
holly....

and i thought i am the one who has a sick imagination....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Slut

Just another slut claiming to love her husband

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This cunt...

...gives sluts a bad name

TMSPTGR3TMSPTGR3over 8 years ago
Absurd

So over the top that all you do is laugh at it. Belongs in humor; adolescent humor.

LVGirlLVGirlabout 7 years ago
The One and Only

Only JPB could have come up with this story.

SigintSigintover 6 years ago
I Fell Off of The Couch Laughing

Only on a website where intergalactic visitors, faerie, vampires and siblings routinely engage in sex could people have such moral indignation over a work of fiction.

I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

so when does henry find out he married a slut who is giving it everybody but him

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 2 years ago

Why didn't Penthouse Letters publish this as is? It's perfect. Five stars, ~~ JBE

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...