All Comments on 'The Weekend on the Farm'

This story has the ring of truth about it. A quality that holds your reader through to the end.... A good read, well done

Some of the tgenses are wrong and I didn't like the way you related the story. Was it third person or what?

Keep trying and eventually you will get it right(er)

Nothing is better than to lay on loose hay and enjoy the feeling of a nude female beneath you. Next in line regarding the haymow as being the place to enjoy a female would be bales of hay. Have enjoyed both and this man knew how to make a love partner feel good - make that great !

First she watched and later she was the attraction object that the man made from a maid to a woman. Nice reading and your descriptions are some of the best on this site. Keep giving us stories.

Any chance of us getting a sequel?