All Comments on 'The West Texas Ladies Chess Club Ch. 01'

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This is a fabulous story. Love the characters. Can't wait for more.

Gorgeously erotic, I hope there's more of the Chess Club to come.

Mmmmm so different and refreshing. A combination of smoldering lesbian sex with words of life wisdom also given by the author. WOW.

Keep sharing your gift for people of both sexes who like to read and masturbate! The feelings you expressed in your writing were so deep and well written - this reader FELT your story. Another 5 for my friend.

A fabulous story, well done. Enough on its own, but a series would be amazing.

I don't want to be the downer of this story but I only enjoyed the first half of the story. Once the other women begin to join like clockwork it became unrealistic. I know it's a CLUB but it just seemed fantastical at that point. I will say: you did a very good job of describing the sex scenes. I may continue reading the following chapters just for that. Thank you for sharing your story.

Chapter II is in pending status. Hopefully it'll go live in a day or so. I'm glad you all are enjoyed Chapter 1!

You lost me at the man-brain and battery dialogue on page one.

“After a while? A gal starts to wonder what else is out there.” I really thought those introductory paragraphs were great!

I wonder how many others on the team will eventually become chess fanatics?

i loved this. Needs more chess puns. Queen takes Queen...

Oh my! What a luscious convergence of spontaneous Sapphic eros. Tish, Lisa, and Cassandra were circulating in each other's space and their shared NEED for authentic pleasure was literally bubbling over, no pun intended. Circumstances brought them together in so that they could share their release with someone they trusted. Jenn was a nice addition, as she understood and wanted to on the one hand be an experienced protector of the girls, but on the other being drawn to their vortex of passion. Looking forward to how AmberS weaves these lovely threads together.