by Tween2Legs
Written by some early grade school aged kid, anytime such junk as "Uh... Uh... Uh... Ohhh... Ohhh... Ohhhhhhh" is in a story shows the author lacks even grae school education. So kid go back to school until your old enough to actually be on this kind of website.
I see you are Critic
Would you please explain just WTF (grae school ) is
Wondering if it may be a school painted GREY and you just hadn`t quite graduated kindergarten yet
Most likely its been the longest 15 years of you`re life trying to do so