All Comments on 'The Whipping'

I dont think it is ugly at all. I think it is real. She is wearing her Master's pain as one would wear a badge of honor. She is aroused by the sadism and is comforted as a reward. This is an honest portral for many of us.. Espcially ligestyle bdsm ers.

Well done!

As Anon Beautiful says, this will ring true to some. Equally true that it rings ugly and abusive to others. Sadist or not? Masochist or not? Is causing another to 'break' a beautiful or abhorrent thing? Therein is the source of the various scores this will receive. The writing is strong and clear. It is the content that will devide.

For me? No, this is not a master I would serve. His care is too costly.

This story could quite easily have been taken from an actual scene.