All Comments on 'The widow'

Two out four stories based on a death in the background. What’s up with that?

CD_Karen writes a sweet and very fine story of a family looking for fulfillment in their own unique way.

Liked the story but for a further test, but Susan could maybe have her mom on her knees begging for more pussy lick/fucking.This was and easy seduction. Anyway liked the story

but was expecting kevin to fuck june,,it was mentioned after all,,didnt expect him to be thrown to the curb..that certainly limited the playing field to lesbo only,,a true disappointment.

Interesting idea but the writing is flat, too matter-of fact and uninspiring. Don't know if you have tried writing in the first person? That could make you go into the main character's point of view and feelings to make a story come alive.