All Comments on 'The Widow's Gift Pt. 01'

Fucking loved everything about this story 10/10

Oh, this is intriguing. I'm excited to see where this goes!

This story must be what Ptichye Moloko tastes like. Delicious.

Enjoyed it very mutch that boy would not possibly have lasted that long but he just had the experience of his life she ownes him . she can train him know should make great reeds

I like the air of mystery this story starts with. I am ooking forward to what comes next!

definitely needs another chapter

This has me intrigued, a great opening chapter to hook the readers.

Again, another story that should be a book. Loved reading it, like a good book, you want to read more, but it's gone.....

How long before we get the next instalment?

Thanks for all the great feedback, Dearest Readers! I'm blown away by the awesome reception this new tale has received. These chapters are fairly long but I try to get a new one out every two weeks or so. But Christmas is a pretty busy time of year for me so there might be a little lag over the festive season. Cheers and Happy reading!

Excellent writing. The dream sequence of the Opera performance was so vivid.

Simply outstanding!

Another banger! Looking forward to the next part!

I like this! I'll be so pleased to see the next chapter.

Intriguing start. Can't wait to see where this one's headed. 5 stars. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work.

Something different and well written! Thank you for sharing your work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Something different and well written too! Thank you for sharing your work. Looking for the next chapter.

No idea where the story is heading, but it’s a wonderful ride so far. Thank you.

I adored this story and I really want to see where it goes!

The easter egg references to other stories was neat suprise

Loved the story keep writing more I really want to see where this is going! I’ve read some of your other stories but this is the only one I’ve commented on. I’m a sucker for the downtrodden, this story has such potential, keep up the great work!!!

Good premise.

Not enough touching, caressing, playing.

Needed more dialog about what she was doing to him, and would be doing to him, and her enjoyment of his enjoyment. Maybe some nice, slow edging so it wouldn't end too soon for either of them.

Four stars.

Wow. Captivating. Headed for part two. Great work.

Excellent. Absolutely stunning. Well written, clean unique concept. As Beautiful as it is erotic. One of the top 1% of all the stories ive read here. Well done. Truly impressed.

Wow. Very much got me hooked. Will probably binge read the rest barring interruption.

I 🤔 think...the three twats at University are in for the surprise of their lives next class day! Levi has been changed, for the better, and the girls are going to suffer the results of this change...and they are going to ENJOY AND DESIRE IT!!

Alina is very special...taking steps to improve Levi and his self-esteem...which I think lots of people are going to reap the benefits from.

Five**5**Stars...and moving on to Chapter 2...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌💯

Nice chapter. Sweet lady.

I wonder what relationship Levi has with his own parents, to be bullied by young women so much through his life.

A few spelling mistakes.

For instance, a consonant that should be doubled due to the change in tense of the verb.

ALSO, "MILF" should be all-Caps, not in lowercase like an actual word!

Yeah, my older stuff is riddled with errors. I like to think I've improved with time and experience over the last year of writing. Still love this story though, and it might get a rewrite in the future.

It was a good story.