All Comments on 'The Wife, the Artichoke, and Jade'

Read the title.

I hope there’s more to this.

As for the negative comment from anonymous, if you don’t like a story it’s better just to move on, especially if you don’t write your own stories and put them here for review. If you do write then try offering some constructive guidance.

There’s no excuse for “haters” and “trolls”

I would love to collaborate. I actually found the negative feedback very amusing. Clearly they read my pretentious garbage to the end. This was my first literotica try, so I was tickled it took. Xo

i really enjoyed the story 5*

One thing that stood out for me is just how feminine the story is. Loved it!

You need an editor/proofreader, but otherwise an interesting story.

"One thing that stood out for me is just how feminine the story is"

Translation - loves the manhating in this story.

Great story! MANY grammatical errors, and it's good to learn the proper use of commas. Still enjoyable though!