All Comments on 'The Will of Astrid'

I for one would be interested to read more of this story. You've established a vivid little world right away, and not a familiar one. There are a lot of stories here that resemble each other to some extent, but yours drums an eccentric beat I don't think I've heard before.

Definitely a step beyond the normal story - and I am not talking about only Literotica

but including non- erotic writing as well.

I suspect that you have a unique talent that I, for one, would like to see develop further.

So, I would encourage you to continue writing - if not down the path of this story perhaps another theme.

In any event I hope to see more from you in the future.