by pouyqwert
You have done a great job with the start of this story. I can only hope we see additional chapters very soon. Wouldn't mind seeing longer chapters.
I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Please keep them coming at lest on a daily basis.
Decent writing, we'll see where it goes. If I thought about cheating around my kids they would have my ass, all kids would. Don't know any spouses that would stay home in snow and miss this trip.
Seems a waste to publish a fragment of a story. It would have been better to complete it
Decent writing, though, so don't be discouraged.