All Comments on 'The Window'

by mntnman64

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

good first effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

spend a little more time on the girl sucking Dean, after all she was the one seducing him

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
i realy liked it

i thought it was very well written hope you continue to add to this story

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