All Comments on 'The Winter Doll'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
"0 comments/ 0 views/ 0 favorites"[?]...

I only skimmed the story, but I loved it! It's good stuff. So, why isn't anyone else picking up on it?

The title (which is great, by the way) description is vaguely generic ["love and danger ... college"], and implies a male protagonist. Surprise!! Female fights enemy with mystic allies.

Story tags won't get as many readers, either; recommend adding "supernatural", "bdsm", "femsub", and some others.

Voted a '5', by the way; real glad I crawled thru today's titles to find this gem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Agree with prior comment, this is good,

8 pages of mystery, suspense and a spanking good read. -- UK CYNIC

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful, erotic and suspenseful...

There is a little bit of EVERYTHING in this wonderful story!!! A dabbling of BDSM..some more conventional hot and nasty sex..some romance and a good sense of sardonic wit. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of writing.

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