by 32inch
Very good, I am quite interested in future installments. One minor critique, you sometimes use multiple names for a character and it can be a bit of an adjustment to keep up as i read. Example - at one point Donna referred to the witch by three different names within the span of a few sentences (Chris, Christine, and Hristina).
I need more. Please continue writing this story, It can’t possible be finished, there must be so must more. `⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
While I am not into the futa thing, I love any good story and this shows a lot of promise. One thing I feel I should warn you about. Most writers trying to write more than one story at a time usually fail to keep them all going. Heck a lot do not finish even one story. You might think about concentrating on one story, maybe add chapters to a 2nd every now and then, but keeping the 3rd as just an outline. My personal preference is Empty World as 1st, this 2nd, and Bone as 3rd to be worked on at a later date
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Please more of this story, it's great. I can already see the "education" of young witches. Do you have plans for this story of impregnating girls by futanari?
I am sorry that I may only rate this story with 5 stars.
This universe has immense room for many stories and worlds.
Thank you